雅思流程图怕不怕?其实简单得很!

2017-11-23  阅读: 567

雅思写作部分,A类小作文的流程图和地图题一直是烤鸭们比较头痛的部分。此部分题型在构文方式并没有特别的技巧和特殊性。今天威学心宝宝来讲解一下关于流程图分小技巧:

例文:

The diagrams below show the amount of energy lost in 100 units when it is generated from black coal and when it is generated from brown coal.

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这是最近典型的流程图。画的很简单,写起来150个字很复杂...其实就是不同单位的媒在发电厂被消耗的情况。简单的是,里面提到很多数据,可以在写作中使用。

例文分析

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The two diagrams present the information of energy loss in every 100 units fuel energy , from black coal and brown coal respectively.

分析:对题目进行简单的同义改写。开头段保持精简的原则。不要进行过多的句型转化。

It can be seen from the first diagram that in the first stage where the brown coal is sent to the power station, there are 70 units energy wasted, accounting for a large proportion of the whole energy.

In the following stage, transportation and distribution, a relatively marginal amount of energy is lost( 3 units), and the remainder is only 27 units when it is consumed by the consumers in the final step.

分析: 分析棕煤在运输的过程中能源的消耗和变化情况。注意不同步骤之间的衔接手段的多样性。题目中的in the following stage, in the final step都体现出了步骤。同时也要注意句型表达的多样性。第一句话中用到了定语从句,there be句型和非谓语动词,句型很丰富。

The black coal, on the other hand, shows a similar energy loss pattern compared with its brown counterpart.

When it is transported, the energy loss amounts to 68 units, which means more than half of its original energy is lost. In the stage of transportation and distribution, the same quantity of energy is wasted in comparison to the brown coal.

The consumers, who will finally utilize the energy, can only share a small proportion of fuel energy.

分析: 这段话和上一段的思维逻辑是一模一样的,就是按照步骤顺序进行描述,同时要注意数据的分析。最后,在句式上要注意多多变化。比如,这一段的一开始通过一个插入语的方式将一个长句子变成一个短句子,在节奏上听起来更加朗朗上口。

Overall, the black coal loses less energy than the brown coal and the second stage will cost most of the fuel energy.

分析: 最后一段进行总体对比,得出在整个过程中黑煤的能源消耗更少。

结语

分析过这篇文章,大家应该感受了具体的写作套路,建议大量练笔热身,举一反三,以应对考试时题目的出现。