雅思IELTS写作用词小tips

2017-12-15  阅读: 253

对于参加雅思考试的同学来说,雅思写作是其中比较难得一部分,那么雅思写作用词方面有什么讲究呢?威学一百雅思老师总结了雅思IELTS写作用词需要注意的几大要点
  一使用具体的动词
  比较具体的描写会让文章看起来更有说服力,分数当然能提高啦!
  例如:
  1、Poor:My supervisor went past my desk.  

Better:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.
  2、Poor:She is a careful shopper.
  Better:She compares prices and quality.

  二:表语转化为不同的修饰语
  很多烤鸭不明白什么时候用主动,什么被动!用错了,雅思写作分数自然不高!这样做,也是因为这个原因!
  例如:
  1、Weak:The organization has been supported by charity.
  Better:Charity has supported the organization.
  2、Weak:The biscuits were stacked on a plate.
  Better:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate. 


  三:避免使用语言弱的“be”动词
  1、在“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语
  例如:
  1) Weak:Here are the books you ordered.

Revision:The books you ordered have arrived.

2) Weak:There is no opportunity for promotion.
  Revision:No opportunity for promotion exists.
  2、表语转换为不同的修饰语
  例如:
  Weak:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.  Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)
  The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)
  3、作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词
  例如:
  1) Weak:The team members are good players.
  Revision:The team members play well.
  2) Weak:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.
  Revision:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.


  四:不要使用语言过长且累赘的词语
  写作不是用的词汇越高深就越高分,想提高成绩就要用词简单、生动。
  例如:
  1、Wordy:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.
  Improved:We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.
  2、Wordy:My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.
  Improved:My little sister prefers chocolate milk.
  3、Redundant:We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
  Improved:We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
  4、Redundant:My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.
  Improved:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores

五:避免陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语
  雅思是一门语言考试,主要考察烤鸭们的语言运用能力,而写作关键点就在文章的表现力上!
  例如:
  Weak:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.
  I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.