2018年4.26雅思考试教育类大作文分析 方法你值得拥有!

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In some countries, increasing number of parents choose to educate their children at home by themselves instead of sending them to school. Are the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages

4月26日雅思考试这篇大作文是基本合理的一道题目。写的时候,不要完全写成父母和老师在孩子教育中的优缺点比较,题目指的已经是极端情况,父母自己在家带孩子,孩子完全不去学习上课的情况。

一个比较折中的方法,也是现在在家教育的一种常见形式,是几个在各个方面各有擅长的家长相互搭配,一起教学,这样几个孩子之间还是有一点点的social,并且教学的质量相对更好一些,毕竟一个家长很难精通所有科目。

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破题角度

家长自己教,最核心的考虑,一个是对于内容的把控,可以根据本周一讲的对比论证的方法,diss 学校的很多知识点不够实用,且比较死板。同时,家长还可以更好的因材施教,毕竟父母是最了解孩子的。

但是,反面的缺点也非常明显,一个是父母的专业度肯定是不如老师的,老师一般术业有专攻,而家长本身的知识水平参差不齐。其次,学校所营造的 social 和 supervision 的环境对孩子的成长也异常重要。

参考框架

由于题目问的是优缺点之间的比较,所以必须同时提到话题的正反两边,之前常见框架中完全一边倒的方式,是不适合这种问法的。

框架1 (1个优点+ 2个缺点)

开头:缺点更多

主体段1:尽管因材施教,效果更好

主体段2:但是教学内容难以系统化

主体段3:并且,缺乏和小伙伴交流

结尾:重申缺点更多


框架2 (2个优点+ 1个缺点)

开头:优点更多

主体段1:尽管缺乏和小伙伴交流

主体段2:但是因材施教,效果更好

主体段3:并且,知识更加实用、与时俱进

结尾:重申优点更多

框架 3 (2个优点+ 2个缺点)

开头:优点更多(或者缺点更多,看哪个段更长)

主体段1:尽管教学内容难以系统化、缺乏和小伙伴交流

主体段2:但是因材施教,效果更好,并且,知识更加实用、与时俱进

结尾:重申优点更多(或缺点更多)


表达补充

home-schooling/ home education

a child is educated at home rather than at school

homeschool 可以直接做动词

homeschooler 在家上学的人

home educating families

socialize 社交的动词

swap ideas

a qualified teacher 合格的老师

receive education from their parents or carers

share valuable insights

mutual beneficial 互利

pass on information

cope with a classroom environment

uncover additional strengthen and skills through various activities

keep informed

syllabus

role-playing


参考例文

今天的问题是一道老题,网上找到不少的优质范文,选取了其中一篇,供大家参考。

Education is the fundamental building block for children’s development. However, the growth of students is very much dependent on the way of coaching. Some prefer educating students at home while others think it is necessary for children to attend schools. In this essay, I will analyse both viewpoints before reaching a reasonable conclusion.

There are groups of people who consider homeschooling has many benefits for child’s growth. For instance, a student studying at home can get personal attention from parents which result in good academic results. Furthermore, parents are aware of their child’s weakness and can help him to cope with difficulties. Thus, it can be said that children can learn their subjects at the pace in which they are comfortable and this can help them to excel in studies.

On the other hand, many consider schools as the required element in student growth. Educational institutions, for example, concentrate on teaching moral values like tolerance and sharing along with studies. Moreover, they are encouraged to perform tasks in a team, enabling them to learn teamwork and not to dishearten by failure. Therefore, chances of suffering from depression are reduced to a greater extent in case he doesn’t get what he desired in the real world.

From above, it can be seen that both the viewpoints have their own merits. However, I tend to believe that in order to sustain in the actual world, students should be motivated to get educated in institutions rather than learning alone at home. It is thus hoped that the government will enforce strict laws for attendance in school compulsory.