2018年9月15日托福考试 独立写作解析:钱花在哪方面更好?

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It is better to spend money on traveling and vacation than to save money for the future?

分析是以前考过的比较类真题题目,上过课的同学想一下,如果用tcd来分,这个题目的主体应该是人,那么第一反应就可以想到用人来分,那么一段写学生,一段写雇员,此题可破。另一种方式,不分人的话,可以分结果,那么就要思考下花钱独家的好处有什么,比如交朋友、放松、增进关系等,以及存钱给将来用的好处有什么,比如健康、发展、生活等方面。


TCD:

主客体:people【hidden】|money|trvelling and vacation|future

动作:spend | save

限定:无明显限定

结果:better?

People可以拆分,按照人,分学生,雇员,老年人等

学生旅游好处?增长见识,缓解学习压力 | 存钱?上补习班|培养兴趣爱好|买一些自己喜欢的东西

雇员旅游?减轻工作压力,增强朋友或家人之间的友谊 | 存钱?投资|买房|feed the family

老年人?解闷|增长见闻从而获得和后代交流的话题 | 存钱?下一代基金|自己健康

分结果:投资|教育基金|买房等


开头段:现在的人工资高了,有人对于怎么利用这个钱就会产生不同的意见。

With prominent increasing of the average income level for most individuals, the mindsets towards how to utilize money vary a lot. Some people suggest spending money on vacations, while other hold an argument for the consideration of saving money for future usage. In my view, the latter thought would be more rational.


让步段:有人觉得把钱拿出来旅游挺好的,可以放松,因为压力大。然而,现在娱乐方式五花八门,完全不需要花很多的钱就可以达到放松的目的,反而是社会比较多变,未来有很多需要用钱的地儿。实际上...

Some people argue to spend money for travelling would help to reduce the daily working pressure for getting relaxed. However, in the current era, there are tons of ways for entertainment by costing less and even no money to get people relaxed and refreshed such as running in a public park with good environment, thus there is no need to spend a considerable amount of money for frequent trips. On the contrary, the world changes rapidly, where there would be chances to use money in the future for every individual. In fact, saving money for future use would be better.